2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

文中衔接词和过渡词使用的很棒；作者句法很棒，合理使用了复杂句；文章词汇使用较为恰当灵活，希望能更熟练地使用高级词汇。

Living in an age that everyone is not able to leave computers, we must know that each coin has two sides so as to computers. So it's important to think how to use it comprehensively. There is no doubt that computer is a great tool to help us to deal with many works. Besides that, we can also relax ourselves through computers such as chatting, listening music, playing games and so on. What's more, with the development of computer's technology, shopping, learning and something else can be done by using computers, which is convenient for us definitely so that many people are addicted to it, then problems arise. When a person uses computer too long to exercise, his eyes and body would be tired. And we get most information around the world through computer, which keeps us far away the nature, families and friends. As far as I am concerned, it's irresponsible to blame computers, because the true reason is that we adopt to use it. Using computers when we need it but not lose ourselves in it is the proper way I think to use it.