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字数:300 满分:100分
作者词汇表达较丰富准确,不过高级词汇的积累还有很大的空间;如若增加一些长难句的使用,会为文章添彩;上下文衔接不流畅,文章结构不严谨。
In my option,it's not a smart consumer should be.A great smart consumer should understand what he need to buy and what he neen't to buy. It is useless to collect many kinds of coupons to buy some worthless things.For instant,You have already owned a cup,but you buy another cup by coupons.And we always go out to have dinner instead of having dinner at school canteen.Even though we share the bill,we still spend our money in some unnecessary consumption.What's more,all of us are just consumers who couldn't earn money to support our consumption.We spending money which is from our industrious parents.So,we should manage our money responsiblely. All of us should spend our money wisely.Don't buy something which you don't really need.Money management is very significance to our life.