2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):立刻得出结论

从句使用量稍显不足；作者能较熟练、灵活地使用词汇，建议要多使用高级词汇；全文结构较为严谨。

As the sayings goes,“money is not mighty ,but without money we can not live.”It shows the importance of money,but it can not stand for that we must earn money by all means.We should make money with our hands. For one thing,money can buy everything we love and our needs can be meet.For another thing,if we just have wealth ,we can also not live a happy life.For instance,a person have a big house with expensive forniture,Hower,there is no family accompanying with him.how sympathy it is! In my opinion,money is for living happily,we can use it to fulfill our want.Whereas,we can be grasped by money.That is to say,more money is not more fun.In the meantime,only making money by ourselves can we feel comfortable.