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2012年12月英语六级作文真题(I):保持信任

发布时间:2013-05-18 10:58浏览次数:6300
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题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任

字数:150满分:100分

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采用了简单的衔接手法,行文流畅;能较灵活地使用部分高级词汇,有基础拼写错误,需要注意一下;文中应增加一些长难句的使用,会为文章添彩。

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When it comes to maintain trust,we have reached a common ground that trust is an vital links between people for maintaining a relationship .But Nowadays,our society is faced with credit crisis. We become unwillingly to trust the world around us,neither acquaintances nor strangers,even our friends. There is no denying the fact that some terrible actions break up the trust.A case in point is some immoral businessmen who pursuit more profits,and make unqualified products.As a result,they break the trust between merchants and customers.There are more similar phenomenons in our society. Just imagine what would be like if there is no trust in our life.We would not believe the kindness from others,would not trust the relationship with anyone.That’s would be terrible,we must prevent it over our life.so it’s high time for us to maintain trust in our society.

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