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【精析】
这是一份简历。和求职信类似,简历一般包括个人情况,教育背景,个人能力,目标职业等信息。在写简历时,一定要实事求是,不可夸大其词,要特别注意突出自己符合招聘信息的能力。另外,还要注意简历的格式和语言,格式要整齐明了,语言要简洁有力。
文中从句的数量太少;文章词汇词汇丰富度和高级词汇使用熟练度都要继续努力,还要注意单词拼写;连接词过少,建议增加衔接词汇的积累。
Resume: nane : liming sex: male Date of born:1986.6.15 Marital status:single Job objective:foreign trade saleman education background:graduated from University of the North ,english language deparment personal skill: good at english listening,speaking,reading,wrighting;German is my second language, i have the ability of conversation in german;i am familiar with the process of foreign trade hobbies:basketball ,sing ,watch movie