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2013年考研英语作文预测话题:沟通的意义

发布时间:2013-08-23 17:28浏览次数:13034
要求:

题目要求:

围绕沟通的意义写一篇小文章。简明阐述自己的观点。

字数要求:

200字以内

用户的作文(系统评分65.5分
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可适当增加复杂句和从句的使用;文章用了较为丰富的词汇,高级词汇略显单薄,同时注意单词拼写的检查;衔接成分太少,文章结构欠佳。

用户练习作文:

it seemed that people in growing numbers lacking of communication on our daliy life. they are addicted to mobile phone or surf the internet.they make friends online,shopping on line,and that distracted people from reality lives.then,people have no time with families and friends.what is worse,they can not get a happy life or a successful career. with the high-speeding lifestyle ,people will easily get psycial and mentalproblems.what can we do to relax ourselves? i think it good for us to communicate with others.for example ,we may call for some advices from our friends or workmates when there is someting wrong with our works.we can get useful help from our parents when we choose our boy friend or girl friend . communication can make people closer.when skeptism comes from,we should learn to communicate ,it helps us know the truth,and trust our friends.

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