2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):立刻得出结论

采用了适当的衔接手法，层次清晰；文中词汇表达比较多样，能多用高级词汇就更好了；建议适当增加些复杂句的使用。

My favorite course is dancing.Dancing is a elegant art and it is wonderful to dance to the music.First,with dancing we can do some exercise to keep our body slim.What is more,you can finish dancing without going out,so it is convenient to dance at home. Second,when the music play,dancing can make me forget what happened and feel happy.Last,it can cultivate girl’s temperament and grasp new skill.Dancing is a worldwide language that help us communicate with others,therefore,dancing is social intercourse means which is beneficial to make friends. That is the reason why I love to dance and have a dancing class.