题目:Computer and Man人与电脑
字数:150满分:100分
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As we are living in modern sociaty,we are closed to technology.Computer,which is used in house,school,office,is one of the most useful tools . Since computer is being used all over the world,the arguement of it is not ended.some people think that computer has more advanteges than disadvanteges.They hold the idea that computer made world comunication realized.We can have a veiw about what's going on at the other side of the world through the Internet.However,some people are addicted to computer games,some bad masage are through computer,causing unsafety in our lives.