假设你是某公司销售助理王海,请给David Smith先生写一封回信,内容包括:
1感谢对方订购100箱衬衫;
2建议用纸箱而不用木箱装运,并列举纸箱的优点;你公司最近与别的美国公司交易中也用过纸箱,效果很好;
3盼回复
Dear David Smith
文中单词拼写做的很棒,再多积累些词汇就更好了;简单句偏多,应增加从句使用;连接词过少,建议增加衔接词汇的积累。
Dear David Smith, I am writing to thank you for the order of 100 boxes of shirts. I think it will be better to deliver the order with paper-boxes,not wood-boxes,as boxes are quite convenient and environmental protection. Our company recently have used boxes when we trade with America,and we satisfied with it. We are looking for to see your reply. Best wishes. yours