作者能较熟练、灵活地使用词汇,建议要多使用高级词汇;全文结构较为严谨;若增加一些从句的使用,文章会更不错。
With the development of the era,Online Shopping has been being universal and fashion.All of us enjoy shopping online and no one can deny the fact it benefits us a lot.However,Online Shopping also has a lots of problems,as an saying goes,"every thing has two sides".As far as i'm concerned,as a brisk person,don't be additied in Online Shopping and just keep calm.Then you should think over if the goods is useful or worthy to buy.