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可适当增加从句和复杂句使用；高级词汇使用较丰富，拼写做的很棒；衔接成分太少，文章结构欠佳。
As a faithful reader,I would like to take the opportunity to express my appreciation for your active reporting in social problems.I hope you would pay more attention to the abuse of the plastic bays in some regions. In my opinion,widely consumption of plastic bags lead to white pollution.In order to reduce the usage of plastic bags,some measures should be adopted and carried out.Firstly,every one should be support the restrictions and shops should not provide consumer with plastic bags freely.Secondly,we should enhance our people's awareness of protecting environment.Only in this way can we concerted effort to control the white pollution. Thank you for spending time reading this letter and I hope my advice could help to solve the serious problem.
