2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第1套):The most interesting place

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If there is a friend of mine to visit my hometown, I'd like to take her to visit the HuiShi Tower in HuiNing, GanSu Provice. The HuiShi Tower is local in HuiNing, which is famous for it's long and special history. About 70-year ago, The Fourth HongJun went to HuiNing and had a meeting with The Center HongJun in HuiShi Tower. From then on, the HuiShi Tower becomes a holy place that Chinese often visit. When you enter into the tower, many photos catch our eyes which belong to Chinese famous person. There are also many shelves full of books about HongJun.