2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

拼写做的很棒，在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累；文中应适当增加从句和长难句的使用；行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用。

With the development of science and technology,it ia more and more important to our society for computer.Through computer,people can know more things that social changed,go shopping on net instead of go out. But,every coin has two sides.So it is computer.We can't derecognition computer bring us convenient and fast,at the same time,it takes us negative effect.Low vision children wear glasses at an early age result from playing computer too much.What's worse,some websites to spread some bad information,caused more and more crime. So,when we use computer,we should protect our privacy,don't believe others easily,don't browse bad websites,farmulate appropriate time online,keep a clear head.To sum up,in order to promote the harmonious development of people and the computer,we should rationally use the computer,let it is really good for social development.