2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

可适当增加从句和复杂句使用；能较灵活地使用部分高级词汇，有基础拼写错误，需要注意一下；全文结构较为严谨，应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。

With the development of science and technology,it is more and more important to our society for computer.Through computer,people can know more things that society changed,go shopping on net instead of going out. But,every coin has two sides.So it is computer.We can't derecognit computer bring us convenience and fast,at the same time,it takes us negative effect.Low vision children wear glasses at an early age result from playing computer too much.What's worse,some websites to spread some bad information,caused more and more crime. So,when we use computer,we should protect our privacy,don't believe others easily,don't browse bad websites,farmulate appropriate time online,keep a clear head.To sum up,in order to promote the harmonious development of people and the computer,we should rationally use the computer,let it is really good for social development.