题目:Computer and Man人与电脑
字数:150满分:100分
作者能较熟练地使用词汇表达,一些高级词汇的使用也比较灵活;可适当增加从句和复杂句使用;行文稍欠流畅,应适当增加连接词的使用。
With the development of science and technology,it is more and more important to our society for computer.Through computer,people can know more things that society changed,go shopping on net instead of going out. But,every coin has two sides.So it is computer.We can't derecognition computer brings us convenience and fast,at the same time,it takes us negative effect.Low vision children wear glasses at an early age because of playing computer too much.What's worse,some websites to spread some bad information caused more and more crime. So,when we use the computer,we should protect our privacy,don't believe others easily,don't browse bad websites,formulate appropriate time online,keep a clear head.To sum up,in order to promote the harmonious development of people and the computer,we should rationally use the computer,let it is really good for social development.