小学二年级英语作文:Our house

很好的运用了从句，但部分句子稍有瑕疵；采用了简单的衔接手法，行文流畅；文中单词拼写做的不错，另外再增加词汇量积累就更好了。

Our house is a townhouse It has up and down two floors upstairs has three bed rooms one is me one is my sister the other is my parent's,room my bedroom is blue color has a desk and book shelf and has a large bed usually my favourite bear and I sleeping together,my sister room is pink color ,we are love own rooms Downstair has a kichten and living-room , TV is set up in living -room my sister and i go home watching TV sitting our sofa everyday.kichten has a dinner room everyday Mom cook food ,we love this meals we love our home