文中词汇表达贫乏,但是单词拼写做的不错;正确句子比例很高,但需多多加强从句的使用;文中很少出现过渡词和衔接词。
Dear Mr.Johnson, Hello. We wrote this letter to you for the products which you send to us. Sincerely, we have received the products at the mou of 3,000. However, according to our signing of the No.35 order, you haven't sent us other 500 products. We hope that you can check your product list. We are looking forward to your early reply and we except that you can send the rest of product to us as quickly as possible. Your sincerely, Wang Haiyang