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这是一则关于日程安排的通知。需将日程安排一一列出,内容并不复杂,可以不使用完整的句子。
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Notice Please know the action of visiting to Nanlin farm in Qinglong xian on June 20th 2010, the itinerary is as follow: at 8:30 in the morning the general manager a brief introduction or the farm in farm office. at 9:30 in the morning visiting of farm at 10:30 in the morning visiting the farm-run factory. at 11:30 in the morning as the guess to the farmer. if somebody have interest please gather in the front of the libiery at 6:30 in the morning. the bus will be depart at 6:40