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内容：本人在12月15日到22日在纽约举行的展览会期间了解到贵公司产品号为5670的新产品，非常感兴趣，请贵方发给我们一份价格单和说明书。感谢贵方的合作，希望我们可以建立贸易关系。
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1．price list and instruction价格单和说明书
2．establish business relationship建立贸易关系
高级词汇比较灵活，还要请作者增加词汇表达的丰富度；句式变化不明显，另外要多多加强从句在文中的比例；语言不流畅。
I have known your new product no.5670 in the exhibition in new yark on the date of Dec. 15th to 22nd, I am very interesting it. could you please send a price list and instruction to us. Thank you for your cooperation ,we hope we can create the trade relation,
