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I like my counyside but it was changed last year .When i was children there have many trees that you was feel comfortaion actually i am fond of the river that have many fish. although the live was hard ang the road was dirty .but everyone was happyness Now there are many bigger build .And there is loudly and the air was dirty so that many people feel bad everyday you can hear the car is loud . you don't see trees that live in the place many years ago .the fish didn't swim .i think its important to dig out and play trees .