过渡词很丰富,衔接词同时使用的恰到好处;作者能较熟练、灵活地使用词汇,建议要多使用高级词汇;简单句比重稍微偏高,注意个别句子错误。
I am an English representative and I feel that's my mission to help you to have an interest in English . But how to get a good grade ?Here are some my advice for you . First of all , read English aloud make sense . The more loudly you read , the more benifits you will get . Second , you must make a revision as soon as you study a new class . Third , I think you can watch English movie so that you can develop an interest in it easily and also earn a lot . If you do so , your English will no longer be better !