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字数：200满分：100分
这幅漫画象征性的描述了一个倒在地上的瓶子，一些牛奶洒了出来。在这个瓶子的旁边站着两个人，一个垂头丧气的说“全完了！”，而另一个则说“幸好还剩点儿！”。这幅画所表达的内容既意义深远又发人深省。
这幅漫画的目的是告诉我们在生活、工作和学习中遇到挫折时，不同的人持有不同的态度。积极乐观的人总是能够发掘事情好的一面，而消极悲观的人总是为他失去的东西伤心抱怨。总之，一个人的态度能够决定他的成败。
在我看来，我们应该向那个积极乐观的人学习。在生活中无论遇到什么样的困难，我们都应该用积极乐观的态度来面对。只有这样，我们才能取得成功。
过渡词很丰富，衔接词同时使用的恰到好处；文中词汇使用较丰富恰当，但高级词汇表达还需要很大提升；作者句法基础较为扎实。
As the drawing above depicts,a bottle of drinking which stores merely a little water lies on the ground with most of water overflowed outside.What a tragedy it is when one man sees it with excessive sorrow while the other one considers it positively as gratitude,as a result of a little water left inside. Nothing can be more vivid than it that the situation above in practically emphasizes the different conception which means negativity and positivity towards incessantly various life,thus evoking us to not only take a further thought on everything we have encountered but also confront it with a positive sight. If a tragedy descends on me,there is no doubt that the poster one namely positivity is my choice to deal with it,thus guaranteeing it that we can efficiently and consciously treat it with more methods.On the contrary,we should also take the negative side into account properly as to get more useful information.
