2011年考研英语作文真题:旅程之“余”

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What a absurd scene it is as the drawing shows,two men sitting in a sightseeing boat which is handled by a shiper freely share not only delicious barbicue but also beautiful sights in front of them,thoroughly regardless of a quantity of floating litter which comes from them. Nothing can be more vividly than it that the situation above in visually protrait the increasing inmoral behavior among people who travels outside ignores the rules and throw out junks casually,thus leading to the incessantly terrible natural evironment.The nature,acting as the basic but paramount role in humanitic life,is the common relative of everyone living on the earth and contribute ample resources in need to us,thus building the prosperious and advanced society.There is no doubt that everyone on earth has the obligation to shield it from being destoryed instead of tearing it. From my point,the earth is to humanity what the water is to the fish.Having obliged resourcees excessively,notably our society becomes more and more flourish while the natural environment is gradually being shattered due to the increasingly commonplace immoral behavior abusing everywhere.It should be reality that the human extinct from the earth unless we adopt some measures like proper publicity and refrainning our behaviors.