2011年考研英语作文真题:旅程之“余”

词汇表达灵活多样请继续保持，不过高级词汇的积累还有很大的空间；语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；作者句法基础较为扎实。

What an absurd scene it is as the drawing shows,two men sitting in a sightseeing boat which is handled by a boatman freely share not only delicious barbecue but also beautiful sights in front of them,thoroughly regardless of a quantity of floating litter which comes from them. Nothing can be more vividly than it that the situation above in visually portrait the increasing immoral behavior among people who travels outside ignores the rules and throw out junks casually,thus leading to the incessantly terrible natural environment.The nature,acting as the basic but paramount role in human life,is the intimate relative of everyone living on the earth and contribute ample resources in need to us,thus building the prosperous and advanced society.There is no doubt that everyone on earth has the obligation to shield it from being destroyed instead of tearing it. From my point,the earth is to humanity what the water is to the fish.Having procured resources excessively,notably our society becomes more and more flourish while the natural environment is gradually being shattered due to the increasingly commonplace immoral behavior abusing everywhere.It should be reality that the human extinct from the earth unless we adopt some measures like proper publicity and refraining our behaviors.