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Should college student hire cleaners It is recently report that some college students hire cleaners to help them do some miscellaneous work,as for this phenomenon,different people have different opinions.Some persons support it ,because it can save time for students to do other things,and the last oppose it.I was the latter,views are as fallows. Fist of all,we are still students,and we are supported by our parents,especially.Most of us can't make money by ourselves,hiring the cleaner would add additional expenses.Moreover,as a college student,we should learn to be independence,and do these things by ourselves,responsible for ourselves,only in this way,we can cultivate our sense of indenpendence and responsibility. In a word,as the saying goes:if a man can't sweep a house by himself,then he can't conquer the world.
