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英语三级A卷作文模拟附范文:秋游通知

发布时间:2013-05-22 12:03浏览次数:2297
要求:
Direction: This part is to test your ability to do practical writing. You are required to write a Notice according to the following instructions given in Chinese. Remember to write it in no less than 80 words on the Composition/Translation Sheet. 
事由:秋游 
参加者:一年级新生 
活动内容: 
上午:参观植物园并看《人与自然》的展览 
下午:颐和园 
集合时间和地点:l2月27日上午7:00;校大门口 
注意事项: 
1)自带午餐 
2)参加者在本周四前到学生会报名 
Words for reference: 

the botanical garden植物园

【高频词句】 
assemble集合 
enter name报名 
left baggage office行李寄存处 
1.According to the schedule,the touring will include…根据计划安排,旅行路线是… 
2.Please be on time.请务必准时。 
3.You call leave your baggage in the left.可将行李放在寄存处。

用户的作文(系统评分76.5分
评语:

过渡词很丰富,衔接词同时使用的恰到好处;文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用高级词汇就更好了;可适当增加复合句和从句的使用。

用户练习作文:

In order to not only help freshmen adapt campus' life as soon as possible as well as broadening their horizon, we are going to have the autumn traveling. Therefore, the freshmen are supposed to gather together at the school gate at 7 o'clock, December 27th. In the morning, we will pay a visit to an exhibition called human and nature in the botanical garden. After that, we have the chance to enjoy ourselves in the Summer Place which has wonderful view. However, we should take our own lunch to there because it can save some times. If you have an interest in this traveling, enter your name and ready for the trip.

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