作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;作者词汇表达比较多样,也能较好的使用一些高级词汇;衔接成分太少,文章结构欠佳。
As information techonlogy develops,increasing E-books play an impotant role in our life.Wherever we are in, we can read with a phone. In some people's opinion,they think E-books will replace with traditional books.Because compared with traditional books,you may feel more convenient,you don't need to take books .Meanwhile you will pay less money on books' bought,many books on the internet will be on account.e-book also can reduce waste,tree resource is very important,with e-books we can reduce the use of paper. But in my opinion,I don't agree with that thought.I believe using traditional books may let me calm down to read books.On the contrary,using e-books is like a way of fast-reading.You may read a book quickly on the phone.Similarly,using traditional books is a traditional way for teaching.It's impossible for teachers and students to learn by reading e-books.But it not means that e-books can't exist with traditional books.The two ways are avaiable for people to read.