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Recruitment Announcement The summer vaation is coming,we decide to organize a game about summer vacation volunteer.Now we need to 20-30 volunteers. For the purpose of protect environment of our city, we need volunteers that help people to promete the awareness of city's environmental protection and guide people sort out the differet rubblish.This activity is going on from July 1 to July 29. I f you are a student of our college,if you want to contribute to environmental protection.Don't hesitate just do it,you just need to send your resume to our office in room 301 of the Teaching Building 5 before June 15.For more details,please contact 1245678. Student Unions