2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

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From this education pays, we can know that the more doctoral degree the salary are more higher from unemployment rate in 2010. Of course, the doctoral degree lead to higher of the earning. From that know, it is obvious that the different of education pays . So, the government should take a series of measures to control. On the one hand, the government encourage