作者能较熟练地使用词汇表达,一些高级词汇的使用也比较灵活;作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;文章上下文衔接不是很紧凑,结构缺少组织。
Recruitment Announcement The summer vacation is coming,we decide to organize a game about summer vacation volunteer.Now we need to 20-30 volunteers. For the purpose of environmental protection of our city, we need volunteers that help people to promote the awareness of city's environmental protection and guide people sort out the different rubbish.This activity is going on from July 1 to July 29. If you are a student of our college,if you want to contribute to environmental protection.Don't hesitate to just do it,you just need to send your resume to our office in room 301 of the Teaching Building 5 before June 15.For more details,please contact 1245678. Student Unions