Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
采用了简单的衔接手法,行文流畅;简单句比重稍微偏高,注意个别句子错误;作者能较灵活地使用词汇,高级词汇使用较恰当,但存在一些拼写错误。
Nowadays, interne plays an important role in our daily life. You can find almost everyone has a phone on hand, or a computer at home. Why? Because internet makes our life more and more convenient. But i think electronic communication would never replace face-to-face contact. There are some of my views. Here comes a sence. We family are sitting together and going to have meal. Will we still ues phone to talk to my family member? Enjoy the time family being together which is the happiest thing i think. And if you have any questions or in trouble, it is the best way to communication with you family face to face , in order to solve the problem. Communication face to face is the bridge to go to others' heart. We should spend more time to talk to other in our life, after all, electronic communication hasn't emontion like human being!