小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

作者句法基本功不错，可适当增加从句的使用；文中词汇表达灵活性要提高，希望能较熟练地使用高级词汇；衔接成分偏少。

"Info China 2007" co-sponsored by the State Council Informatization Office, Ministry of Information Industry, National Development and Reform Commission, Ministry of Commerce and Advisory Committee for State Informatization is officially inaugurated today. As a flagship event of China's information industry, the conference will surely boost e-commerce development in China in a healthy, fast and lasting way. On behalf of the Ministry of Commerce, I would like to express my sincere congratulations on the opening of the conference.