拼写做的很棒,在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;文中应增加一些长难句的使用,会为文章添彩;全文结构较为严谨。
saving money or using tomorrow’s money, it’s a question.according to the survey,most students agree to save money,but there still are many peole prefer to use tomorrow's money. there was a famous story about this question.the American old lady uses tomorrow’s money to buy a house and pay back the loan in her whole life. the Chinese old lady saves money and buys a house before her death. this story is often used to show the benefits of using tomorrow’s money. nevertheless, taking this story as an example is a little extreme. using tomorrow’s money needs the following conditions:a steady job, a good wage and a light burden. fifty percent of people don’t own these conditions, using tomorrow’s money may put them into trouble. For instance, if they can’t pay back the loan, the bank will take their houses and cars back. although saving money is slow and hard, it is safer for us to hold our property . furthermore according to Chinese traditional custom, saving money is more acceptable.