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1993年专四作文真题范文:My Idea of Becoming a Teacher

发布时间:2013-05-15 00:43浏览次数:1441
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观点阐述性作文,提出2-3个观点(对未来成为教师的认识或憧憬)写作方法可以是例证式(教师的崇高)也可以是因果式(教师的作用)。
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可适当增加从句的使用;语句间的衔接成分用的不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;拼写很棒,可适当增加高级词汇的使用。

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As we all know,teachers play an important role in students' life. From my point of view, to be a good teacher required many qualities so that he can set a good example to students. First, a teacher should be kind with students and be patient to answer the questions students ask.Although the question is easy for a teacher to answer, he is supported to answer it carefully in an accessible way so the students can understand it deeply. Only with patient heart can he be friendly with students and in the other way,students are properly find he is great to get on with so that he will be willing to talk out his heart to the teacher. Second,a teacher needs to love his students as his own children for love will make a big difference in teacher and student relationship.With love,he may not be angry easily when a student makes a mistake because he will get a grip on himself and repress the anger.Having a good control of your feeling is extraordinarily necessary and therefore the major thing is to love students. Above all, teachers not only teach students with their studies but also their life so he must be responsible to the job.

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