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Nowadays more and more people are concerned about their health. As is known to all，health consist of Physical health and psychological health.what we should do is keep them balance and take care of them.First of all,keep Physical health. First of all,we should keep taking exercise every day and try to take exercise to make our bodies strong.second,avoiding too much pressure is another method to health.According to scentist Studies have shown that excessive pressure could cause heart disease and a variety of physical discomfort.third, Some sport and swordplay while others run can also help us to benefit our body. I do believe,only we obey this rule strictly which our health will improved.What’s more, How to Keep Psychologically Healthy is a more important issue in our life. Psychologically healthy problems can cause the disease. People with the psychologically healthy problems can’t work well and enjoy the beautiful life. Get enough sleep is a good way to reduce stress . It is important that your get enough sleep and that the sleep you get is of good quality. To help reduce stress,you should get 6-8 hours of restful sleep each night.Try any means to keep health so that can we keep a wonderful mood and have a better quality of life.
