全文结构较为严谨;若注意一些句子错误,文章会更漂亮;作者能较灵活准确地使用词汇表达,更能较熟练地使用一定的高级词汇。
Welcome to my campus,i am sincerely glad to see you in china. If you arrived ,i will take you the library that is very significant for my school. While libraries is familiar for us,the library has different significance for my school in our campus.First of all,the library with classical beauty is a extrordinary style and it can show you Chinese classical build.Secondly,there are lots of books in here and you can learn what you want to know.Finally,i want to let you know my school well by introducing our library. I have prepared to entertain you and i think that i will give you an unforgettable memory on your trival.