文章在句法方面做的很棒,从句和复杂句的使用不错;拼写做的很棒,在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;全文结构较为严谨。
Welcome to my campus,I am sincerely glad to see you in china. If you arrived,I will take you the library that is very significant for my school. While libraries are familiar for us,the library has different significance for my school in our campus.First of all,the library with classical beauty is an extraordinary style and it can show you the beauty of classical Chinese architecture.Secondly,there are lots of books in here and you can learn what you want to know.Finally,I want to let you know my school well by introducing our library. I have prepared to entertain you and i think that i will give you an unforgettable memory on your travel.