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I am excited to hear that you are coming to visit my campus and cannot wait to express my welcome.Byhere,I would like to recommend the Culture Spuare to you,which is of great interest and entertain to give it a try. The Culture Square is the heaven of syudents where you can see colorful acctivities organized to add extra pleasure to student's monotonous routine .Besides,you are always free to engage yourself in any of these acctivities that fascinate you.I am quit confidience that you will find it benificial to communicate and interact with other students.Moreover,as a major part of the campus culture,the Culture Square offers whoever wants to get an insight into the campus an opportunity to know better the campus culture. In a world,the Culture Square ,a world full of vigor and vitality,a window through which you can get a big picture of the campus. I am sure you will have fun.Look forward to seeing you soon in the Culture Square.