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2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):手机

发布时间:2014-06-09 15:38浏览次数:11352
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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief account of the increasing use of the mobile phone in people's life and then explain the consequences of overusing it. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

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作者能较熟练地使用较丰富词汇,以及部分高级词汇,单词拼写也要仔细;文章结构不够严谨,应增加过程性词汇的使用;可适当增加复杂句的使用量。

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how we feel happy today,there are many troubles in our mind,just like job,colleague,friend and so on. how we are feeling and deal with this problems?i think tje key point is your ability.if you have ability enough,nothing can stop your step. i alway remeber that i was child in 7 years old.when i was working on computer at home,suddendly the computer broken down.i felt scared and asked my mon.my mon said she didn't do,too.i need to do a homework.what should i do ? i haven't ability enough to deal with it.i felt unhappy all the time.but,i didn't give up.first,i searched the knowledge by phoon.second,found how to deal with it.third,do experiment on my computer. yes,finally,i successedand finished my homework.i felt happy all the time.after that,when others ask my question,i will repeat the detail and sometimes i need searching internet.it not only help others,i also feel happy and learn more from it. in summary,everyone meet everying,iy could make his feel happy or unhappy.but we can transform unhappy from happy by your ability.develop your ability,one day,you must needing and finding it.

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