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Should College Students Hire Cleaners I am a college student at the school now,who knows the college life. There are plenty of things for us to do, but I frown on the idea that college students should hire cleaners. At senior high school, we were busy in getting good grades to attend a dreamy university.Our parents offered all what we needed, such as, money, clothes, and selfless love.We relied on them in life and affection. College students have too many clubs to take part in, too many classes to attend and too many attractions to addict to that we ignore our real life and our own power. They do not earn the money to bring up themselves, lack of the power to take care of others and waste the money just as running water. However, I hold a view that we are not a child any more, but an adult. We are supposed to deal with the problems in our study, life and emotion. We come to earn for life or a family. College students are to the new citizens who support the society and even the recovering country. What we can do is closing to what our parents did. We have the power to solve the difficulties on study, so we have the energy to clean the bedroom. Before our wings can bring us up to the sky, we must respect the person loving us all the time and handing us up. Think about how hard it is to get each meal on the table. I want to rely on myself in what I can do.
