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过渡词很丰富，衔接词同时使用的恰到好处；文中词汇表达比较多样，能多用高级词汇就更好了；从句数量偏少，且文中有几处句子错误。
In my opinion, it is not wise to judge people by their appearances for the reason that inner beauty is the most important. Take one of my friends, Lily, for example. Actually, she don't have a beautiful appearance, but she is a warm-hearted person who always spare no efforts to help others, such as housework. Maybe now the social have changed lots of because of the development of technology as well as economic, so that the number of people who judge others by their appearances have increased. However, everyone is supposed to insist the national manner of China. So I hope that we shouldn't judge others only by appearances but also their behavior.
