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2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

发布时间:2013-05-18 11:00浏览次数:17423
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题目:Computer and Man人与电脑

字数:150满分:100分

用户的作文(系统评分82.5分
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高级词汇需要继续积累,单词拼写不错;作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;全文结构较为严谨,应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。

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Computer and Man With the development of technology and Internet,it becomes a commonplace of human to go online through computers.Nowadays,Man is closely associated with computers,which far outweigh our thought originally. With the wide-spread of using the computer,we are in the era of information explosion.Admittedly,we can search information easily just with a simple click sitting in front of the computer.For example,when you have a difficult question,you can surf the website namely”google”and ask the question.A few minutes later,the other person who knows the solution will answer you.Besides,news can be known easily just by the Internet.In addition,without going outside,we can buy things through the Internet just sitting in front of a computer.What’s more,compared to the stability of TV programs,computer affords us to see whatever the program and whenever you want to see.Therefore,computer has brought us many benefits. In my opinion,the advantages of computer’s invention fars weigh its disadvantages.Computer has brought human convenience to realize the world.Nowadays,every house owns a computer fundamentally.And surfing the Internet through computer has been an important part of our lives.

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