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Travel broadens the mind Traveling nowadays is no longer an extravagence to people.They are traveling everywhere not only for pleasure,but for gaining knowledge.Travel broadens the minds and the sights of people.Besides,it makes them judge life wisely and,lead a rational or dreamy wonder in the world. One often gets confused and passive when staying one place and doing the same dull thing.Deep in their hearts ,they keep the desire to go around and somehow,be crazy about something.They prefer to move and travel to avoid the pent-up atmospher or feelings.While travel makes it possible for someone to broaden her or his mind for fresh air and knowledge.That means new blood is injected to body ,in this way people get restored. Of course,sometimes,it is not travel itself,but the persons or things the travelers meet that help to broaden minds,excite one's passion and intellectualize one's life.What's more,travel refreshes one's inspiration and soul,make one more mature and raional. One should travel with heart and a state of preparing to learn at any time.Then one can be wise.
