2011年高考英语卷写作表达题目范文汇总(42):和老师建立良好的师生关系

作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；文中词汇较灵活，但要注意积累高级词汇，拼写错误也要注意；上下文衔接不流畅，文章结构不严谨。

In my opinion, only good relationship between teachers and students can make students grow up healthily and happily. Thanks to Miss Chen who is my Chinese teacher, I am interesed in writing. I used to be an ordinary student in my class as I was not good at anything.But Miss Chen found my talent in writing and she gave me a large amout of advice about how to express my emotion on the composition properly. She gave me encouragement when I doubt whether I was a good writer.So I respect her so much.Gradually,I made a great process in writing. Miss Chen asked me to take part in the composition competition.Eventually, I got the first prize. After that, I don't consider I am ordinary any more and become confident.I think a nice relationship should be like this. Teachers love their students while students show their high respect to their teacher.