2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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if my foreign friend is going to visit my hometown ,firtly ,i will take him to see a river that in a peaceful place .i like it very much ,from my yong ,i always come here to catch fishes or just sit here quietly ,the scene in there is comfortable ,i am sure he will love it