字数:200满分:100分
采用了简单的衔接手法,行文流畅;适当增加一些从句的使用,会为文章添彩;文章词汇表达丰富,高级词汇使用较丰富,但拼写检查要重视。
As is vividly depicted by the drawing.There are two disabled men helping each other to run.losing their crutch.Under the picture is caption:I together with you can travel all over the world if we combined our healthy leg.The picture epitomizes a common phenomenon that an increasing number of people pay attention to the cooperation significance. So what are the invisiable and intangible reasons behind the phenomenon reflected by the picture?The most important element to be considered is the factor that with economy developing and increasing and our life style changing and improving,the cooperation performs an indispensable role in our life mainly due to the truth that,it is cooperation based on the complementary advantages that contributes to the ulimate success.in the second place,Without cooperation, a person cannot accomplish much in the increasingly inter-depentent society we now live in. In order to improve the situation given by the cartoon,it is hight time that we took immediate steeps.It is fact that only when the administration ,the public and individual deserve their full efforts,can we make the cooperation widely accepted and strengthen.I am convinced that we chinese could acheive greater success through cooperation