2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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In my opinion,my hometown is wonderful .there is clear air,green grass ,corlorful fowers and so on.If you come here i think you will be love it . when i was child,the revier is the best place to play,for me.you can sit the grass ,and litsen song of the brids.sometimes with the little wind ,you will feel everthing is profect .when your mood is bad ,it must be the best choos to come here.