题目:Computer and Man人与电脑
字数:150满分:100分
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As we know ,computer has got into our life. It's important for us to use the computer. Of course, we can use it to something and it sounds like we can't leave it. However everything has two sides. In the one hand,we can use it to study , check to something what we consider difficult, and we can watch Tv when we fell tired. In the meanwhile , we can commuciate with our friends face to face by the compute . In the another hand, it can take us many interesting thing and gives us comfortable life. therefore , we can depend on it to finish more thing. So it has many bad influence on us, for example , it hurts our eyes and gives us the unreally world. and it takes us more time to enjoy the life. As far as i am concerned, we should control the time to play computer.