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Everyone has his/her own life,but nobody can illustrate clearly what your life can be meaningful and what the real worthest thing is in our life. It is said that the donkey means one thing, and the driver another.Someone who love singing will think highly of singing,and someone who love dance may Also,a person may hold different views in different period.When I was a kid,I thought playing with my friend is the most siginificant thing in the world,and with time going by,I didn't understand the importance of the study until I was a senior school student.At that time,I thought I could get the chance to be educated and study all the tome is a meaningful.But now something have changed, as far as I'm concerned,somebody can do what he wants to do at anytime is the most meanful thing. In a word, though your life can be many kinds, you must cherish time.So that will be a meanfuling life.Meaningful life,means never waste time!
