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简单句比重稍微偏高，注意极个别句子错误；上下文衔接不流畅，文章结构不严谨；作者词汇基础挺好，能灵活使用部分高级词汇，但词汇拼写要再接再厉。
The meaningful life In different people's sake,the meaningful life has distinct comprehensions.What i think a meaningful life requires three factors ,someone you love,some money you can spend,something you want. To start with,fall in love with someone,and you will feel you have a reliable bay.Putting you whole heart in him or her,you are bound to do something meaningful for him or her.You may sincerely kint a sweater by your own hands for your soulmate.Making a palatable meal is also you'd likely to do.Thus you are busy in working for your love.The more you occupied,the richer you are. Besides,it's said that money isn't everything,but we can do nothing without money.Everthing around us,clothes,food,house,travel,basic necessites,not one needn't money.A meaningful life employs time,energy,especially money.Assuping you want to help a homeless,you are also a homeless without money,how can you do that meaningful thing. Last,not having a fitting work,you wouldn't live a cozy life.One without dream just like a salted fish.Dream is like a torch leading to the meaningful distant.You have a dream and struggle for it ,which is a ideal life.No pains, no gains.Pain always come with happiness,while the happines exactly is what you want.Once one get he want,he feel he have a meaningful life. Finally,when you have adequate money,one lover you love each other,a occupation hit your mind,you are living a meaningful life
